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Thursday 23 May 2013

The Hungry Fox


Once upon a time there was a hungry fox.
He ran  across the road and saw some
grapes. He jumped up and almost caught a
bunch in his mouth. Then he saw a
trampoline. He jumped up and jumped up and he got a good bunch. He was very happy.

3 comments:

  1. Great writing Aidan. I like that the wolf used a trampoline to jump up and get a bunch of grapes.

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  2. Hi Aidan I like your fox getting the grapes

    From Damien

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  3. Hi Aidan I like your fox getting the grapes

    From Damien

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