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Wednesday, 5 June 2013

sandcastles


Sandcastles

The water was smooth like glass. It
was a hot sunny day and we were at
the beach playing in the sand. We
made a sandcastle with shells on it.
Then we swimmlng and after that we had
a picnic.
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  1. Unknown5 June 2013 at 21:04

    What a great paragraph about sandcastles Aidan! I liked how you used lots of detail and said what the water was like. Keep up the great writing!

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